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Old 2012-01-19, 09:41   Link #18655
MaRv3n054
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Join Date: Jan 2012
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Originally Posted by DarkJak2050 View Post
I happen to be the author of this fanfic. My friend posted me the link to this site when he tried Googling for it.

If you've read it already, you'd know that my OC (Ayasaki Sora) has a military background. I'm still working on a backstory for that. In the backstory of his regular life, his father is nowhere to be found, but supports financially. Has an ill little sister. HAD a mother, "died of birth complications" is what I'm thinking of adding in.

I was thinking of adding some material from 'Crysis'... Since in the first game, they work for the USSF, while in my FF my OC works (worked, once the prologue is finished) for them as well. I was thinking of a character from Crysis meets up with Sora, and do something like a two-man joint operation or something. And in the long run, Sora receives intel on a prototype nano-suit. I'm also adding in an ability that my OC can use. I was thinking of like being able to see a glimpse of the future. The max time only being 1 minute into the future.

If it seems OP, I will strongly consider nerfing it.
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