Ah, I resd Comet. Kept meaning to go back to it and do some full on reviews...
If you ever need a beta reader, I could help on that - Comet had a few things that made me wince - for example, when Yuuya's promoted, he lught to be a Lt. junior grade; ensign and 2nd Lt are same level... Still, it's a good effort.
Also, for that achievement, it ought to be,"Defeat your project manager in single combat."
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