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Old 2011-06-30, 22:16   Link #32039
Tiresias
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Join Date: May 2010
Location: Pekanbaru (UTC+07:00)
Age: 37
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Originally Posted by RadiantBeam View Post
Meh, mostly all I have is a lot of build-up to the actual moment, then the fade to black. A lot of it is just generally both of them being nervous, Nanoha having a bit of an overprotective moment as Fate shoos her out of the house, and Caro being her teasing, but well-meaning self when it comes to Lutecia. The actual sex is a fade to black moment. Imagination works best for that kind of thing, IMO.
Well I guess it is a safer bet than trying to actually write that stuff only to end up with lines like "so good I could vomit" and "She's good like a skilled prostitute" (Oh, Nasu)

I still vouch for crack storage closet bondage, though
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