[Kha]

Originally Posted by USB500

I just love the characters you guys just posted. Give me some times so that I can comment each and every one of them.

@ Kha:
...did I sense shameless self-promotion?

I'm still rebalancing the 2 mages I put up so I'll repost them together.

Uh... No not really. His story's been developed over several short stories I wrote offline for the informal writing circle I was part of back in my home country, and I made sure I balanced it and kept it in canon as much as possible.

@Loner: Revisions? I thought there was no data on her past in the first place as I thought the YnS illusion was based on Fate's wish for a happy family rather than fact. And so, I conjured up this scenario to insert a char believably into the story while not disrupting the canon events (which explains Kha's absence during all anime series) such that there's no canon trace that he's ever there, but it was because he's somewhere else when the canon took place. This only works if everything fits nicely with canon, which until recently was all anime-canon. However, my lack of light novel and manga knowledge impedes me from being 100% sure, and thus I am concerned, for my friend's gonna be using most of the proposed backstory so I got to correct it fast. As a Fate-fanboy and considering almost all of my fics has some conjecture related to Fate's past, I better get this straight.

How much about Fate's past is there in canon across all media (light novel, manga, sound stage, anime)? Has there been contradictions amongst the media?

Originally Posted by Serenity85

lol this thread has sorta died down now hasn't it^^ well I'll see if I can spice things up a bit^^

I'm really loving everyones ides, really well thoughtout. My only thought is with giving a character uber ranks like S. Come on, your like making uber rare mages that are suppose to be few and fleeting I think a nice cap is AA, good but theres room for improvement^^

Ok Back to my character^^

For those who have forgotten, this is where she stands as of now
http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...1&postcount=14

now on to chapter 2^^

Spoiler for How Aselia Joined TSAB, RF6:

How Aselia joined TSAB, RF6

It happened quite accidentally really. Nanoha, Fate and Hayate were no a weekend break from RF6, giving the new recruits a chance to visit family and generally take a break after a week of training. While site seeing in Tokyo, they sense a magical disturbance coming from the nearby forest. As they rushed to the seen, the disturbance faded. To be safe, they decided to search the surrounding area; hopefully they would fine something that would be linked to the disturbance. They came across the Mayio Monk Shrine and so they decided to make sure no one was hurt. Upon entering they could feel the residual affects of a spell, and soon enough they came across the main courtyard were a group of monks had started to repair a damaged pillar and a little blue haired girl being comforted by what appeared to be the resident Master Monk. They decided to see if the girl was Ok, and if there was anything they could do to help. Upon a brief conversation they soon discovered that the little girl, Aselia, had caused the disturbance.

After things cooled down, the Aces decide they needed to have a conversation with Miroku about Aselia’s well being. Over a pot of green tea, they carefully explain to Miroku that although she is young and so far she’s only caused minor incidents with no injuries, she will eventually get older and her magic potential will eventually get much stronger then it is now, she may accidentally let her power go out of control again with a higher risk of doing harm to herself and those around her. They explained to him, that it is best for her to get proper magical training, something she can’t get here. After taking in everything they had to say, he decides, with a reluctant heart, to let them take Aselia back with them, under a few conditions one of which stated that she would be put under their care and no one else’s. They agree, and Miroku heads out to explain things to his daughter. As expected, she doesn’t take it well; after all, this was the first real home she ever knew. Aselia wipes the tears from her eyes and reluctantly agrees with her father, and she begins packing her belongings. A teary eyed Aselia says her goodbyes to rest of the shrine, but just as she prepares to board the TSAB helicopter with Nanoha, Miroku emerges from the Temple caring the shrines ancient sword. In a final jester of love before his daughter leaves, he hands over the blade, telling her to be careful and train hard. A now crying Aselia hugs her father and boards the helicopter. It then takes off, heading towards the TSAB main headquarters in Mid-Childan, where Aselia would begin training with the rest of the recruits.

Bio States at this point in the timeline:

Character Name: Aselia Mayio
Gender: Female
Looks: Hair: Long light blue-ish/purple
Eyes: Blue
Height: 110 cm
Age: 10 (confirmed after medical exam)
Birthday: 8th April
Weight: 31 kg
Affiliation: TSAB Trainee
She is currently under the care of RF6 as per Miroku’s request, must to the dismay of the higher-ups

Mage Rank: C+ (tested)
She has potential to be very strong, but she currently can’t fully control some of her stronger spells, resulting in the lower rank.

Skill Rank: A+ (tested)
Not a common rank given as magic is the main key factor, but because of her skills with the sword, they decided to test her and give an appropriate rank. Even thou she is one of the best swordsman (minus Signum) RF6 and TSAB have, her lack of skill with magic has kept her in training then on missions.

Usual Wear: a modified white Monk robe to fit her size and a pair of running shoes purchased for her by Miroku while he was shopping for supplies in downtown Tokyo. She considers these her most cherished positions. She currently still doesn’t have a barrier jacket as of yet.

Magic Type: Vaulcon – a mix of Velka and Summoning, it still not known what type it truly is yet, so for now, it is being called Vaulcon

Caster class: Close-Range Elemental Summoner (Ice)

Device: She currently uses the ancient sword given to her by her father, it is still not known if it is and I.D. or what power if any it holds.

No new spells at this time other then ones she currently knows.

Heres something for ppl to chat about. Let me know what you think, as well as suggestions to improve it^^

I'll post chapter 3 when I have it finalized. Here some hints, she gets he device and barrier jacket, and a familar face will join in the trainning exercises, try to guess who^^

Chario better reinforce the holodeck to avoid getting smashed by "Kaze no Kise" or a related variant.

More skills for Nanoka and loli Capn. Tessa coming soon but in the meantime keep the comments coming!