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Now the sword looks a little wierd, sorry about that.
As for how to position everything, it depends on what kind of message you want to bring out. If this is post-ending Mai, and the sword is in the ground because she threw it away, it'll be best to have Mai on the left side and the sword behind her. This give the message that the sword is in her past. Otherwise, if the sword is still in her life, you should have the two elements closer together. That would mean that she already has the sword, that she's in the middle of something. What you have now seems to give a mixed message, which might not be a good thing.
Why is Mai facing the sword? Is she going to pick it up? If you want a scene that's at the begining of her demon-hunt, young Mai will fit better into the scene. Then the distance will also make sense, as it looks like she's going to go pick it up and begin something.
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