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Same here. Need to refine the whole confrontation scene where Kanzashi tries to apologize for ditching Saito. Unlike the draft, he doesn't say "I forgive you" immediately. More like:
"I'm tired. Tired of....pretending we're a happy family. I do that enough back in our own time. Let's just.....forget this ever happened, okay mo-" He took a deep breath head and shook his head quickly. "....Kanzashi?"
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