[princessnanoha]

Originally Posted by LVD

So uh, for the Lyrical Waha doujin, my mates and I are having trouble re-wording page sixteen....

Spoiler for Possible slight spoiler 'cause Rein's too cute.:

リインの　せいで　遅れた　足の　回復を　お手伝いしたい
Help in the rehabilitation/recovery of her legs that Rein delayed

How should we re-phrase it so it doesn't sound so.... literal? Or at least make it not sound so awkward without having to type out a paragraph.

The weird thing is she's talking to the book, but just expressing her feelings. The translation makes it sound like she's making a request to the book.

Or something. I don't think most people would notice/care/take it too seriously, but eh.

OTL

Making up for the delay in the doujin because English is not my forte....

thanks for that