[Soljashy]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

It's the title of this story I'm working on, which revolves around the Sentoukijin, which are sisters therefore... :3

Sounds fair. For a moment there I feared your characters were going to spurt random extracts of Japanese in the middle of your story (which would've been bad imo).

I don't particularly feel like doing this one because of the length, but I'll see how far I get – if I don't finish then maybe someone else could finish the job.

Originally Posted by Fate.San

HayatexFate

Spoiler for Soljashy's translation (page 1):

Panel 1
"...yate."
"Hayate!"

Panel 2
"Hayate, wake up!"

Panel 3
"You'll catch a cold!"
"Ugh..."

Originally Posted by Fate.San

Spoiler for Soljashy's translation (page 2):

Panel 1
"Come on, Hayate. Your body can't rest properly here."
"Mmm..."
"Hayate!"
"Ngah..."

Panel 2
"You'll catch a cold. If want to sleep, you should go to bed. I'll carry you... OK?"
"Yeah, I got it, I got..."

Panel 3
"...it..."
ZzZzZz

Originally Posted by Fate.San

Spoiler for Soljashy's translation (page 3):

Panel 1a
"*snore*"

Panel 1b
"Sheesh."

Panel 2
"She must really be tired. Excuse me for a sec!"
*scoop*

Panel 3
// Translation unknown until someone finds out what 仮目室 means. <_<
"I'm surprised Hayate could fall asleep here."

Originally Posted by Fate.San

Spoiler for Soljashy's translation (page 4):

Panel 1
"There... you go."

Panel 2
"Ah, Hayate! You have to change your clothes or your uniform will get wrinkled!"
"*snore*"

Panel 3
"ZzZz..."

Originally Posted by Fate.San

Spoiler for Soljashy's translation (page 5):

Panel 1
"Oh..."
"...well."

Panel 2
"But that necktie looks so uncomfortable."
shuffle shuffle

Panel 3
"I'll be off to bed, then, Hayate. Good night..."
stumble

Originally Posted by Fate.San

Spoiler for Soljashy's translation (page 6):

Panel 1
squeeze

Panel 2
"Mmmm..."
squeeze

Panel 3
"Nngh... ZzZz..."

Originally Posted by Fate.San

Spoiler for Soljashy's translation (page 7):

Panel 1
"Oh well."
shuffle shuffle

Panel 3
"Good night."
"Hayate."
END

I'm having a ball with all these ん, すぅ and ぐぅ. Feel free to alter sound effects as you please – they really aren't that important, after all.

Originally Posted by Fate.San

Spoiler for Soljashy's translation (page 1):

Panel 1
"...... Ugghh..."

Panel 2
"...—!!??"
"...M, mmm..."
"Uh oh, I hope I didn't wake her!"

Panel 3a
"*snore*"

Panel 3b
"Let's see... I remember Fate-chan was... Woah, what am I doing? Man! ...Hmm?"
"She's got some weird sleeping habits..."

Originally Posted by Fate.San

Spoiler for Soljashy's translation (page 2):

Panel 1a
"Oh, she's hung up my uniform for me..."

Panel 1b
knock knock
"Ah, come in— I mean, no, wait..."
"Hayate-chan?"

Panel 2
"Nanoha-chan? Oh, in that case, come on in."
"All right, I'm coming in. Ah, so Fate-chan was here, I knew it!"
"Nanoha-chan, careful! Fate-chan is still asleep... Don't shout like that!"
"Nyahaha, don't worry!"

Panel 3a
"Fate-chan has always been like this."

Panel 3b
"ZzZz..."
"Once she's fallen asleep, she doesn't wake easily."

Originally Posted by Fate.San

Spoiler for Soljashy's translation (page 3):

Panel 1
"As soon as you think she's finally up, she keeps dozing off. If you leave her, it'll be noon before she wakes up."
"Ahahah, for real? We can't have that! Better wake her up."

Panel 2a
"Yo, it's time to get up!" // Not so sure about this one.
"Mmm..."

Panel 2b
"Aha! She's awake!"

Panel 3a
"Good morning, Fate-chan. Thanks a bunch for last night!"

Panel 3b
Doze—...
"......Ah..."

Originally Posted by Fate.San

Spoiler for "Soljashy's translation (page 4):

Panel 1
"Good morning."
"Linith."

Panel 2c
"ZzZz..."

Panel 3
SURVIVAL INDETERMINATE

Lol.