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Old 2010-04-07, 13:57   Link #53
Haladflire65
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Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Normandy SR-2
Age: 29
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Originally Posted by ganbaru View Post
PreSage As Moonie said, the font could be changed.

My 3rd try, I added the eyes's color and reworked some effects.

C&C are always welcome.
It looks a little bit too washed out and the white feels empty, also I think you can change the font to make it look more visible. Also, maybe bring out the eye colour more, because I can't really see anything there
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