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Originally Posted by Ice Climbers
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The character appears to be translusent. I don't know what the others think, but I think this looks messy. Additionally, maybe you can adapt the tone/hue of the blue in her wings and the blue on the left/right side in the clouds to be like the blue in the day gradient (I'ld try to color blend these parts with the darkest blue of the day gradient). And then you'ld still need to smooth out the hard luminosity transitions.
Here is a low quality example that I made in 5 minutes:
You can see I was very lazy correcting the parts near her arms and I did not take care with the text (so it does blend out now). But imo in this version the colors in the wings and left/right of the wings look less messy (still I was not able to get rid of this strange translucency effect inside her... maybe you can correct this with your source picture for ayu - have you accidentally applied less then 100% opaqueness to her layer? Or is it maybe not the top layer?).