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Old 2011-07-15, 13:29   Link #8209
vansonbee
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Originally Posted by Okashira View Post
It was so clearly obvious from page one that the story is completely written around Eba (not even Haruto, it's Eba), and that everything that is happening in between is there to give "the Eba choice" a bigger momentum by adding a bigger drama, bigger frustration, bigger suspense and many other things.
Agreed to an extend, it was obvious in the beginning it was either Eba or Nanami, because at that time, we didn't know what role Eba was going to play.
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This series is basically something that could have been wrapped up in 15 chapters or so, but that wasn't done as such because the author wanted to add more feelings to it, that doesn't mean "it sucks", this has been kinda of a roller coaster with many different points, but who are sitting on the roller coaster haven't truly changed at all regardless of how many characters have been written in and out in the story.
Too bad it wasn't wrap up in 15 chapters, it would of kept the story in consistency and would of been well liked.

Seo added too much unnecessary drama into the series and the development of Haruto the protagonist hasn't changed and current chapter show us how everything amazing falls into Haruto lap in less than a day...
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