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Old 2008-03-06, 15:08   Link #2044
Keroko
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Age: 36
Quote:
Originally Posted by Satashi View Post
Name: Sisterly Bonding
genre: Yuri
Rating: MA
Length: 2,475 words
Pairing: Keroko/Nanoha

Send PM for the link to story if you are interested. This story is steamy but I think a did a vastly better job than I did on Love Ties.
Lazy copy-paste of PM comments :

Er... wow, that certainly turned out a lot more... steamy then I expected. I guess it's safe to say this isn't exactly animesuki safe?

To start, Keroko was done spot, impulsive and oblivious to her actions.

I can't really comment on the quallity of the lemon. I've read lemons before, I won't deny that, but I don't really know what makes a good or bad lemon. I liked it though.

The emotional part at the end was what really struck the bond between the two. The dual support is just how I imagined it: Keroko will always aim to protect Nanoha from harm, while Nanoha will always be there for the emotionaly unstable Keroko.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora View Post
I see

But why would I wage war against T3h Messiah?
You don't. You follow him.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora View Post
[Vader] NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!![/Vader]

Forgive me Keroko-tan, please (seeing a mini-version of anyone (so CUTE) crying just has me melting ) I was half asleep
I know, adorable, isn't it?

Keroko-tan:
Uuuuh~ *hic* So Fuyu-chan doesn't hate me?
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