2011-01-29, 11:53
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Story Idea
While it is true this has been done before, I think there needs to be a a time loop story for FSN. While I am working on some details, I do have a loop I want to post. If anyone can think of better loops, please feel free to post them on here. I'd be interested to see other scenarios that screw Shirou over.
Spoiler for Looped Minor: Loop #1:
Emiya Shirou blinked as he looked at his surroundings. As he stood confused on how he got into the halls of Fuyuki High School in the middle of the night, he had the strangest feeling of deja vu.
"Hey!"
Startled out of confusion, Shirou jumped back into a guarded stance and faced the owner of his ambusher. Nothing could have prepared him for the all to familiar form of the Servant Lancer.
"Lancer?!!" he managed to gasp out before he was pinned to the wall with Lancer's spear at his chest.
"Oh? You recognize me eh? So that little sprint their must have been some sort of reinforcement magic. You got farther then I expected," Lancer mocked as the edge of his Spear found its way on Shirou's throat.
Watching this, Shirou's eyes reflected not fear, but dread.
He recognized the scene before him.
This was the start of the Holy Grail War.
That part where he got stabbed in the heart.
Like hell that was going to happen again.
"Well, unluckily for you, since you saw us, your goin-,"
"TRACE ON!"
"eh?" was Lancer's only reaction before his mana was cut off and the pain set in.
"#$*@$%#$!&@!?$#$!!"
Shirou dismissed Rule Breaker as Lancer proved himself a true son of Ireland when he started swearing worse then a sailor's prostitute. He had no idea how he got back to this moment in time, but he was going to take full advantage of it.
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"Ok, this may have not been the best idea."
"What gave you that idea Master?" snarled Lancer to his third master, Emiya Shirou, as his fellow ally, Saber recovered in his arms.
After contracting Lancer things were supposed to go differently. And they did.
Things went FUBAR for Emiya Shirou.
After a few mishaps, battles and the summoning of Saber, Rin had apparently become Shirou's sworn enemy.
That was when things got weird.
So here he was hiding in an old church from Tohsaka Rin and her servants Archer and Caster, while her ally Matou Sakura madly searched for him with her servants Rider and Berserker.
Shirou froze.
Wait. Wait a minute.
He was in an old church. Hiding from enemies. And low on Mana.
Oh crap.
"Oi master, me and Saber need a recharge. Since you suck as a mage, get over here and pull down your pants."
Lancer started taking off his armor. Saber was still unconscious.
It couldn't get any worse.
"Oh. I see you two mongrels are busy committing acts of depravity. Don't let me stop you. I, the King of Heroes shall now take Saber from your mongrel hands!"
The Root be damned.
Last edited by dragon20990; 2011-01-29 at 14:11.
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