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Originally Posted by Haladflire65
Thanks for the comments 
I tried adding some stuff to the bg and reworked the text... hopefully it helps with the theme? Or is it too busy now?
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I think those are incredible improvements. I like the new version over the old one.
IMHO, however, it could use some extra colour effects. Try using a lighting c4d on the background, to make a glowy effect on the upper half and a dark bottom half (keep the text on the bg tho). I would also add a yellow/white linear gradient on overlay to lighten it up a bit (erase the gradient parts which makes the sig's colours look wierd tho).
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Originally Posted by Kagayaki
A second version....
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The lighting streak on the bottom right of the girl's head is out-of-place IMO. Maybe make the girl's eye glow a bit more? Also, personally, I would love it if the girl's hair is distinguishable from the black bg. So maybe give the girl's head a slightly lighter aura so that the hair's outline is visible.