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Originally Posted by Aebliss
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Yay for the Climaxing of Setsubun. Always a pleasure. :P
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Originally Posted by Kaisos Erranon
Danchou isn't around to make a flowchart, but I'll post this here for now.
Spoiler for Day 6 Outline:
September the Seventh, Day 6
It's raining.
Haruhi
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Boredom)- The flashback to Haruki's baseball game.
6th Day: Morning: This Really Isn't a Date!- Kyon arrives ridiculously early at the meeting place, but encounters Haruhi anyway, who in an attempt to one-up him, has arrived even earlier.
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Logo)- The flashback to the CSP's disappearance.
6th Day: Noon: Falling Through the Cracks- Kyon spends more time with Haruhi, who seems to be treating the whole thing as a date rather than a search... however, somehow, he finds himself in Closed Space, and Haruhi next to him, although she still interacts with the world outside as though nothing was wrong at all...
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Closed Circle)- The flashback to the island mystery.
6th Day: Evening: Nothing's Gone Wrong- Everything is fine. Everything is fine. Everything is fine. Everything is fine. Fine is everything. Everything is everything. Kyon says goodbye to Haruhi, goes home, and everything is fine.
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Augustus)- The flashback to the end of the endless summer.
6th Day: Night: As the Pieces Fall into Place- Kyon decides to put things together and mostly figures out what's going on.
6th/7th Day: Midnight: Exposition End- The story begins with unusual scenery.
Mikuru
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Boredom)- The flashback to Haruki's baseball game.
6th Day: Morning: Radiant Smile- Kyon meets up with Mikuru, who starts referring to their outing as a 'date'. Kyon dies of happiness. BAD END
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Logo)- The flashback to the CSP's disappearance.
6th Day: Noon: Stereotypical Stalking- However, instead of doing date-like things, Kyon and Mikuru end up following a strange boy in Victorian clothing around town. Kyon suspects something.
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Closed Circle)- The flashback to the island mystery.
6th Day: Evening: Confrontation- Mitsuuru finally notices that someone is following him, and confronts Kyon on the matter, since Mikuru has run off. Only after does he realize who they are. Kyon, in turns, confronts Mikuru on her using him again. Semi-angstful. *thumbs up*
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Augustus)- The flashback to the end of the endless summer.
6th Day: Night: As the Pieces Fall into Place- Kyon decides to put things together and mostly figures out what's going on.
6th/7th Day: Midnight: Exposition End- The story begins with unusual scenery.
Yuki
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Boredom)- The flashback to Haruki's baseball game.
6th Day: Morning: She's All Right- Kyon, arriving at Nagato's house, finds her absorbed in books as normal. He's relieved to find that she seems to have recovered from -that event-.
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Logo)- The flashback to the CSP's disappearance.
6th Day: Noon: The Ceremony- Nagato performs some crazy ritual to drive out the thing within the headphones. Kyon questions if it's all really necessary, but then... something appears.
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Closed Circle)- The flashback to the island mystery.
6th Day: Evening: Ceremony's Aftermath- Kyon is injured after having helped Nagato battle the something, and, although she heals him instantly, she insists in her own way that he spend the night for safety reasons.
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Augustus)- The flashback to the end of the endless summer.
6th Day: Night: As the Pieces Fall into Place- Kyon decides to put things together and mostly figures out what's going on.
6th/7th Day: Midnight: Exposition End- The story begins with unusual scenery.
Itsuko
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Boredom)- The flashback to Haruki's baseball game.
6th Day: Morning: Professor Itsuko's Love-Love Attack!- Kyon, still scarred, is awoken by both the rain and the rocks hitting his window. It's Itsuko, and Kyon, stress built up, explodes at her.
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Logo)- The flashback to the CSP's disappearance.
6th Day: Noon: Treating the Symptoms- Kyon has difficulty trusting Itsuko at all anymore, but she convinces him that she can help to at least disguise his face. In gratitude, he takes her out to buy her both lunch and an umbrella. Mmm Wetsuko.
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Closed Circle)- The flashback to the island mystery.
6th Day: Evening: Fox Hunt- Itsuki phones up Kyon to let him know that he's procured his 'cousin's' transfer papers, and Kyon agrees to meet him if only to punch him in the face. However, it also appears that members of the Agency are trying to locate Itsuko, and are using Kyon to get ahold of her. Kyon swears he'll definitely punch Itsuki in the face on Day 7. (He does.) Itsuko vanishes, and Kyon goes home.
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Augustus)- The flashback to the end of the endless summer.
6th Day: Night: As the Pieces Fall into Place- Kyon decides to put things together and mostly figures out what's going on.
6th/7th Day: Midnight: Exposition End- The story begins with unusual scenery.
Kyonko
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Boredom)- The flashback to Haruki's baseball game.
6th Day: Morning: Existentialism- Only One World- Kyon and Kyonko wake up at the same time, and start to discuss the nature of existence. Kyon gets very close to Kyonko's true identity. Also a bit of fluff and near-Imouto-discovery.
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Logo)- The flashback to the CSP's disappearance.
6th Day: Noon: Passing on the Worst News- Kyonko needs food badly, so Kyon takes her out to eat somewhere. While Kyon is in the washroom, a worried and frightened Itsuko finally manages to find her friend, who she then informs about the fate of their universe.
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Closed Circle)- The flashback to the island mystery.
6th Day: Evening: He is the Terminator- Not understanding what's gone wrong, Kyon tries to cheer Kyonko up by walking around the city and firing horrible jokes at her. They eventually end up at the school, where they encounter a strange event that leads to a large naked man (Haruki) attempting to glomp poor Kyonko.
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Augustus)- The flashback to the end of the endless summer.
6th Day: Night: As the Pieces Fall into Place- Kyon, with Haruki's 'help' (who, by the way, is now wearing Kyonko's green dress) decides to put things together and almost completely figures out what's going on.
6th/7th Day: Midnight: Turf War- Haruki, Kyon, and Kyonko decide to head to Kitaguchi Station to meet up with the other Seitenkan, but find all six of their friends already there...
Bad Ending
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Boredom)- The flashback to Haruki's baseball game.
6th Day: Morning: Morning- Nothing happens.
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Logo)- The flashback to the CSP's disappearance.
6th Day: Noon: Noon- Nothing happens.
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Closed Circle)- The flashback to the island mystery.
6th Day: Evening: Evening- Nothing happens.
6th Day: Memories: Flashes in Space (Augustus)- The flashback to the end of the endless summer.
6th Day: Night: Night- Nothing happens. Kyon doesn't even bother to think of what's going on.
6th/7th Day: Midnight: Terminated- A massive earthquake occurs, and Haruki teleports into Kyon's room, saying that he's “The last one I have to kill”. He then crushes Kyon with a giant cartoonish hammer, before saying a cliched one-liner. BAD END. (Demo only).
6th/7th Day: Midnight: Exposition End- The story begins with unusual scenery.
This day's gonna be real fun, I'll tell ya that.
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Firstly, Melancholy Haruki-side; he truly sounds like a hot blooded guy. Haruhi however, was more like the usual undecided tsundere. "I like you, but I don't know about love, so I'm not letting you go until I'm sure..."
So about the stuff for Day 6: In, Haruhi's path, sounds like paranoid denial for Kyon "There's absolutely no problem here. No sir, no problem at all."
Despite it being out of season, I imagine Mitsuuru wearing an impractically long scarf as a shout out to John Smith.
Victorian era clothing isn't that odd in the land of gothiloli. Well, most Victorian clothing for MEN isn't that odd anywhere else, just formal looking.
Kyon getting angry at Small Mikuru is the first though.
Is there going to be an epic battle during the exorcism? Headphone wearing shinjin vs Nagato?
Itsuko's path sounds great. Natural tension all the way. Kyonko's path however, really starts with Haruki showing up. Naked. Probably yelling about the coming of God. Sorry, Haruki, but they've already got one.
I don't know about the cartoon hammer in bad end, though. Feels like a bit like trolling after extreme "normalness" earlier. If you want gory, Haruki should punch through Kyon with a drill that pierces the heavens. If you want a R rating, just have Haruki strangle Kyon; painful way to go. If you insist on the hammer, try, "I've always felt your humor fell flat!" or "Now the coffin's shut!".