A242 - Finally! It's nice to see that you've gotten your story off the ground! Good start so far. I'm especially interested in Tetsuo's adopted daughter. Besides the fact that poison specialists are bad-ass, she gets to externally control only the substance, which is just cool as hell! Keep it coming, I'm looking forward to later chapters.
KL - That was an interesting chapter. In a way, it made me feel like I was reading a Naruto chapter; it moved sort of slowly, and not much happened, but it made me more excited for next chatper. I can't wait to see what surprises Kumagimo Tower holds in store.
Katoso - The rivalry between Katoso and Kanji is developing nicely. It's reminiscent of the Naruto/Sasuke rivalry from very early on in the series. I'm also interested to learn more about the two ninja roaming through the tea country, who I assume are related to Katoso because of their outfits. It'll be interesting to see what those two bring to the table.
I'll try to get actual ratings up for all of you on the TONFA website soon. I've been real lazy about it, which isn't good, since many of you have been nice enough to rate my story there
Edit: Well, I started a new fanfic today. Have a look at the first chapter:
http://narutofic.org/viewstory.php?sid=7521
It probably won't be as long as my first one, but I don't know that for sure. Either way, it will be totally different! Read, rate, enjoy!