[Aaron008R]

Keroko knocked some sense into me.
Indeed, I need to give Cadia-tan some attention as well, lest I become alienated from her.

Me: *pats Cadia-tan's head*

Cadia Zwei: Long time no see, Onii-chan!

(She's becoming more literate. She matures thru the posts.)

Originally Posted by Sheba

I liked it, it's not as obvious to picture a swordfight and all the tension surrounding it.

Thanks.:3 Though not as obvious? I'm kinda lost...^^;;

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

.... Aaron.... do you know what your snippet has spawned?!

Sigandis, that's what! Knights of the Swords, their wills clashing, a dance of hearts and blades, on the battlefield of love!

*casts Alert and Accel and RUNS LIKE HELL*

Ninjaposting. TIred. 10,11,12 and 15 hour shifts.

Hardy, har, har, Wild Duck-kun.()

Of course, that's rather expected, considering much of the cast is female. Besides, how can you not have a male OC with a planned large presence in the fanonverse who interacts to great extent with the cast without getting a little harem treatment?:P

Let's see... For Grandis, it's...

Spoiler for Current planned harem chart. >:3:

Hayate: They'll go thru a lot, from GenerationS onwards. They'll end up together eventually. And I'm gonna make the pairing work even thru the sceptical eyes of the Hayaurion legion!!! >:3 (>_>)

Nanoha: "He reminds me of Onii-chan..." (Kyouya and Grandis are voiced by Midorikawa.XD) And some light flirting if I can do it right.

Signum: Another person aside from Fate to spar with. >:3 And naturally, they become trusted comrades eventually.

Keroko: Second closest Ace to Grandis. Keroko starts off hostile at first because of GenerationS, but they become really, really great buddies as time passes. So much so that there'll be Kerondis crack to fly around...>:3 (That's fine, right, Keroko?^^;; )

Fate: If he can spar with Signum, why not Fate? Another playmate for the sword-wielding battle maniacs!XD *RUNZ from Signum and Fate!!!*

Carym: Grandis holds her in slight reverence... At times even Hayate would get jealous about how Grandis treats Carym as if on an elevated status. >:3

Tesla: An eventual buddy as well?:P (Need your input, Keroko... ><)

~Just like that...

Grandis: Ahh. Just like that, I see...

Me: Yep! That's how it i-ACK!!!!

Grandis: I'm not sure if this kind of stuff is necessary...

Me: B-but it'll be great!

Grandis: And what do you mean by playmates for the Battle Maniacs...?

Me: Oh that. Err... Um... Hehe...

*RUNZ*

Grandis: *sigh* =_=

Originally Posted by Kha

*pats Aaron*



The thing is, unlike other threads on the internet, this one shall live till then. We'd have more delicious stuff for you then. Maybe we'll finally have the Cadia Trinity!

Just as long as you don't disappear permanently as An Hero did... We'll wait for the return of Hayaurion!!!

*FLEEEEZ*

Right...

Snippet.

Tousen da. Ore wa Aaron dakara...:P

(Of course. That's because I'm Aaron...:P)

But nevertheless it was like Goose said, in implications! Now taken with this video discovered by Eva earlier, I can now safely conclude:

Signum = Sheryl Nome
Grandis = Alto
Hayate = Ranka Lee

...and their relative heights FIT!!!

*transforms to Wolf form and FLEEEEEZ FASTAAAH!!!*

~___~
DAMMIT, KHHHAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

=3 =3 =3

WIN!

Signum is certainly going all out, and the same for Grandis. Though, it seems that Grandis is having advantage right now with his elemental control. I wonder what's going to happen in Part 2 ...

Anyway, some minor nitpicks:

Spoiler for Errors:

“I expect nothing less, if you expect yourself to last *thru* this battle…” Signum replied. -- through

"evade the incoming crescent of *lame*" -- flame

"It was a spectacular *site*" -- sight

Thanks a lot for both the complement and the correction!!!
And advantage? We'll just have to wait and see...>:3

Originally Posted by Kagerou

I... have returned...
From the barren wastes of the world, I have found my path, and returned here...

...And I bring with me... something... different.
Allow the OCs to explain.

Glen: "When Kagerou-san first began the Order of Freelance Mages, he had a vision of a unit that would mix firepower and magic, creating a diversion from canon that began to snowball out of control.

Emili: "With the introduction of elements from Halo - notably the weapons, certain characters, and a great deal of the equipment - the story of the Order became less of a fantasy and more of a military, harder science-fiction tale."

Erick: "And the story known as Alpha took that a step further, by eliminatin' anything that composed the canon. It destroyed the canon, and that not only alienated a lot o' people, but also made the story nothing like its base.

Franz: "Nanoha has no room for mindless space zombies, hulking giants in green armor, and a useless main character. So it was decided; it's time to return to our roots. By taking what worked, and removing what didn't, Kagerou-san has effectively... caused the Fate of Destruction, and the Joy of Rebirth."

Naomi: "Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha: Alpha is dead in the water; it no longer exists. Kagerou-san apologizes profusely, a thousand times over, for those who enjoyed it, and wishes that he could finish it. But he can't, not in the state it's in. It's time to fix things, to make them closer to canon, to reset his OCs and set them into the right direction."

Rena: "And so begins our story... we are the new characters. We're going to help everything be set straight. We are returning to canon, and putting our own little mix to it, just like a good Original Character should. We're going to diversify the ideas started by our predecessors, and continue that trend. We will fix the problems..."

Raye: "And create new wonders... or so we like to think. This is not only a rebirth, rebuild, recreation, or what have you. This is something new and exciting. Kagerou-san has found his spark again, what made him love to write, and now, he's going to start over. He's going to show you that he can write a good story, without diverging too strongly from canon; he's going to build us up slowly."

Aelita: "You will learn about us, and who we are. You will see a slow buildup of ideas, thoughts, rants, and feelings, creating a new vision for us, in Outer Cadia. We will unite the universe that Kagerou-san envisioned with the universe that we call Kerokanon. No longer will there be such a strong divergence. No longer will canon be smashed to pieces. It will be... extended."

Alexander: "The new Alpha - if it's even called that - will seek to unite Outer Cadia with that other thread, to give people who never come here a new outlook on us, to show us that we both can interact in such a way that they get us. We will make Keroko, Tesla, and Syn as if they were always there. We will make Kha and Fate's romance believable. We will take all of your thoughts and ideas, and we will expand on them. You, all of you, will be helping us... well, we hope."

Zirnitra: ". We are not the Order of Freelance Mages. From this point forward, the old Order is now Goose's, to do what he wants to with them, to do what he will, and make his former master proud. That's right, Goose; Kagerou-san is releasing you. He says it's time for you to make your own way in this place; time for you to do what you will. And Kagerou-san, he's going his own, bringing all with him, even you again, if you wish.

We are The Black Order. And we invite you to help tell our story."

That's a little sad...
But anyway, it's still your choice. I'll be looking forward and will be supporting your project, nonetheless. Go for it, KAGEROU!!

Originally Posted by Keroko

Less IRC, more posting!

!!!!!!!!!

Y-YES MA'A-err, SIR!!!
(Gah...>.> I got trapped...)

(You're right. I guess I will now. I miss being here. Thanks, Keroko.)

You know, these two should get along just fine after Grandis gets Befriended. They're quite a lot alike, yet each with their own particular traits.

Yep, they would. Like I said above, sparring partners. >:3

Originally Posted by Kha

EPIC FAIL

*dies*

See? I told you putting it up was a bad idea, Aaron. T_T

*chills in the corner*

Zetsuboshita. T_T Toushoran ni ZETSUBOSHITA! T_T T_T T_T

It's alright.^^;;
The road to victory is laden with many failures! What matters is that you don't give up and gun for the goal!!! >:3

Originally Posted by Kyral

Well... Kakihara was born in Düsseldorf and his pronunciation is pretty good. But yeah he somehow manages to make it sound like Exprozion! xD

Yeah. XD

Ah sorry for not commenting the match itself...
It was 2 o'clock in the morning and I was staying at a friends place watching anime all night, so I was only able to quickread things.

It's alright...^^;;

Pretty impressive! Signum fighting is always nice. And Grandis has some badass moves himself. xD

Thanks!

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

MORE!!!!

Later!!!

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Warning: following spoiler box is made of randomness. Feel free to ignore it if irks you.

Spoiler for random:

"Have you ever felt this before? The knowledge of inevitable dread that haunts you from the pit of your soul that something awful is about to happen?"

"This flame that once burned bright and fierce. Slowly burning itself away to extend its life. Is it pitiful? Or is it being foolish?"

"I no longer know. What was once clear to me, I do not understand now. Tell me what is true and what is false now."

"The magnificent siren that now lies cast in stone, buried in loss and fear. What shall become of her frost and flame? Shall they lie forgotten now that God has forsaken her?"

"The girl who never knew herself. Before she is ready to take her first step, providence stands as a cage to her cursed fate. The door of death opens wide from there. "

"Bitter from trust, the black hand sunders all before him,"

"The mortal and the god who wears the same mask. One's story has ended. The other is fated to carry his song for eternity."

"Sisters not of blood fall from the heavens. One sleeps in the earth while the other walks wearing a wraith's cloak. The armored King carries the broken heart. The sunlight that once shone brightly withers in the blizzard's grace."

"The remainder of an angel refuses to mend itself. The sorrowed knight takes his page to the ends of the world to look for her."

"Guardian Star of the Night can no longer shine the way. Mother Light of the Night becomes one with the Night once again. The false dawn is celebrated as the Night fades."

"The never-born laugh rises high as the cards scatter. The Kings bows before the Joker as he juggles fiery torches."

"Holding his pen high, the Storyteller continues his writing without a worry. Naught a tear is shed nor a smile is traced as the paintings of Life are brought before him. He has seen everything in existence yet he grasps for the riddle of tomorrow."

Hit by the sudden urge to write yet unable to direct it towards something meaningful, I have to resort to venting my frustration in simple words and posting it here. Though I hope it retains the slightest of value for being half-baked riddles of one thousand and one story ideas that has long been clogged in my mind that was released in this binge.

..though I have to say it feels great getting this out of my system through this selfish rant.

I find it interesting.:P

Especially this part about Katrina...

"The magnificent siren that now lies cast in stone, buried in loss and fear. What shall become of her frost and flame? Shall they lie forgotten now that God has forsaken her?"

Nighty-crack, much...? *nudgenudgehinthint*

>.>

<.<

>.<

*RUNZ!!!*

Originally Posted by Estavali

Methink this can be explored and expounded into something very interesting . It, or they, can be as seeds of inspiration, waiting to be sowed, nourished and harvested.

Originally Posted by LimitedEternal

Nicely done short here. I don't think there's anything like a graceful, one-on-one battle to really show what two people are like.

Indeed. Thanks.

Sucks that you're gonna be out so long though... Then again, you got something good to go for, so put your all into it! And we shall keep the banners of Cadia flying high! :3

I'll be counting on you guys!!!

Originally Posted by Satty

Well, I'm just dropping by right now...seems you've been busy.

Anyway, I've got to working on my next chapter of SearcherS, so here's a preview...

Spoiler for Ch.13- Preview:

Satoshi ran to his Device, intent on fighting against Sion again. By that time, he had recovered from the blow, and threw one of his knives at him. Satoshi turned back, casting Variable Shield with his left hand, deflecting the knife, while he grabbed his Device on the left.

“Not bad…” Sion said to him, a slight grin on his face. “Like old times, right?”
Satoshi didn’t answer, instead looking calmly and coldly on what just happened. He didn’t say anything; he was looking and looking. Sion did not attack: he observed him, waiting for a pre-emptive strike at any moment; Nil was excellent at attacking when least expected. It was easier to try and wait than to attack directly.

“Those people are the Numbers, right?” Satoshi asked Sion, confused. “Yes….Jail’s made more since you disappeared.”

“As expected.” he muttered to himself.

Long time no see, Satty!
And the old partners are duking it out I see. I'll look forward to seeing the match in full.

Alright then, see ya. (Wonders how much backlog is going to occur 2 weeks later due to a trip to Philippines...)

Awesome!!!

Originally Posted by Keroko

Very good. Scrapping unneeded complications to make the profiles flow better. I'm proud of you.

I'd also attribute it a bit to how you cared for Kha here in OCT for the past few weeks. Good job!

And be very very carefull with what you do with Chao, Kha. Chao is my favourite character in the Negimaverse, and you know how protective I can get where the lore of my favourite characters is concerned.

It's good to see this side of Keroko once in a while...
Just like the old days, ne, Kha?

Originally Posted by Kha

And of all the screwed up Khrack, I hope at least Keroko x Chao semi-yuri survived.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Somewhat. The main problem is that Chao is basically a non-entity in the manga prior to the Mahora Festival, and since Keroko is not introduced untill the Kyoto arc, it makes it difficult to think of a reason for the two of them to know eachother so well.

Or rather, it makes it dificult to think of a reason for Keroko to know Chao so well.

Complicated indeed...:/

Though introducing sudden connections isn't really that hard. Akamatsu tends to make a number of sudden connections, after all. >:3



Anyway, back to work for me.

*gives Cadia Zwei another pat*

Cadia Zwei: See you again, Onii-chan!

Me: Seeyaz. =3

*runs off*