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Old 2008-01-11, 16:21   Link #63
krisslanza
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Join Date: May 2007
Location: Lording above all of humanity >;3
Age: 34
Hmmm really? As a general rule of thumb when only two people are involved in speaking dialog generally goes in a alternating order, unless otherwise noted.

i.e.
"Blah" said A
"Blah" said B
"Blah"
"Blahblah"

It'd be assumed the 3rd is A responding to B and then the 4th is B responding to A. Of course if it had gone...

"Blah" said A
"Blah" said B
"Blah"
"Blahblah" Said A

You'd be noting 'A' spoke again before B did. Although usually then you'd just connect it... ("Blah" said A, "Blah")

Not to be like saying you did anything wrong or anything @.@; Just pointing that out if it helps any at all. You generally shouldn't need to note whom is speaking after every line of dialog unless multiple characters are involved.
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