Thread: Licensed Iris Zero
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Old 2010-12-17, 20:54   Link #45
outerelf
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Originally Posted by Solecs View Post
Just started reading the translated chapters and am enjoying it for the most part. The only complaints I have are some plot issues.

Like everyone else, the situation with Yuki didn't ring with me. It wasn't bad, but it felt underdeveloped. Also the iris powers are going to cause some plot holes/contradictions. They're a bit overpowered and inconsistent so far. I mean Yuki should have been able to tell if the landlady in chapter 4 was lying about the bathroom stall, no?

Very, very tempted to read that spoiler but I'll try to keep myself in check .
But the landlady wasn't lieing, she was telling them rumors. Besides, Yuki is so scared of ghosts, I don't think it ever occurred to her to check.
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