Thread: SOTM 2010 - May (Seifuku!) - Entry Thread
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Old 2010-05-10, 16:43   Link #27
Haladflire65
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Originally Posted by JRendell View Post
Draft #2

Spoiler for Draft #1:


Any better?
Yeah, I think the render's a bit oversharp in some parts and still too dark, also you can do with a more noticeable border

My ver. 2:

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