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Old 2008-04-14, 14:47   Link #4
OceanBlue
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Join Date: Jun 2007
Wow, I liked it. Nice job. I hope to see more of it. ^__^

One thing I noticed was this line:
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Oh why oh why did spend today lounging around?
Other than that [I had some issues with comma placements or lack of, but no one really cares.], I didn't have a problem with it.

You didn't explain what the fanfiction was about in the post, athough it was pretty obvious once you started reading it.
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