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Eratas123 · 2012-09-06, 05:28

Try adding more actions and describe the feeling of the environment. Dunno if it's good advice, but I tend to add what the character is doing as a sort of break away for sentences.

2012-09-06, 05:28	Link #36442
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Try adding more actions and describe the feeling of the environment. Dunno if it's good advice, but I tend to add what the character is doing as a sort of break away for sentences. __________________