whoo didnt even know there was such a thread
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Originally Posted by Klashikari
let's see in action (version 2) :
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tbh it feels to me that at places it is too cluttered and at others it is rather empty...
there are too many different themes for the fonts and parts stick out too much where they shouldnt...
it would be better to blend the "set up" part imo and extrude hayate's name outwards instead...
being so concerntrated near the middle details near the edges are lacking...i just cant stop noticing that the bottom left and right are too empty even with the effects...
left side : nothing really stands out...maybe move the words "yagami" left to fill in the gap?
right side : even with the writing there it seems all too flat...the BG is just black with a few lines and it cuts off from theme above it...where the bloc ends the BG does so too...this makes it seem inconsistant