2010-05-12, 18:24
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: フェイトの中
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GLORIOUS NIPPON has failed us. Somewhat.
Spoiler for slight corrections/suggestions for Nanoha?:
なのは:
「闇の書事件」か終わってから、
もうすぐ一週間。
「闇の書の闇」も完全に消滅して、
Nanoha:
It's been almost one week since the "Book of Darkness
Incident" has ended.
"The darkness of the Book of Darkness" had completely disappeared,
- The quotations for "The darkness of the Book of Darkness" make me think it's a title. Just wondering if it is or not.
なのは:
リインフォースさんも、
今は八神家で、元気で過ごしています。
Nanoha:
and even Reinforce-san
are all living in good spirits at the Yagami household.
are all living in good spirit at the Yagami household.
フェイト:
うん・・・
お正月は平和に過ごせそうで、
なによりだね。
Fate:
Yeah...
It's good to spend the new year in
peace, isn't it.
peace, isn't it?
フェイト:
すごいよね、
3家族合同旅行なんて。
Fate:
That's great,
a joint trip of three families.
A trip with three families
sounds great.
なのは:
高町家とリンディさんご一家、
すずかちゃんと忍さん達、
それから・・・・・・
Nanoha:
The Takamachi family, and Lindy-san's group,
Suzuka-chan and Shinobu-san and everyone there,
and...
The Takamachi family, Lindy-san's group,
Suzuka-chan, Shinobu-chan and everyone there are coming.
And then......
なのは:
自分のこの手で、
わたしの魔法で、できる事はなんなのか・・・・・・
それを知りたくて。
Nanoha:
These hands of mine,
my magic, what can I do with them......
my magic, what can I do with them...... ?
or, uhm
my magic, what I can do with them......
I want to know.
クロノ:
街中に
結界が発生してるんだ。
Chrono:
A barrier
had been raised in the city.
has been raised in the city.
エイミィ:
アースラスタッフに
調査出動をかけたんだけど・・・・・・
なのはちゃんも、注意して。
Amy:
The Athra staff have
- Official is Arthra, but Asura seems to be more common. Zafira is Zafila and Arf is Alph if you want to go with official names, lol.
なのは:
ごめんヴィータちゃん、
大丈夫ッ?
Nanoha:
Sorry, Vita-chan.
Are you ok?
[✔] OK
[✔] okay
[ ] ok
ヴィータ (?):
う・・・・・・
ああぁ・・・っ!
Vita (?):
Uu......
UWAAa...h!
ユーノ:
消えずに残った小さなかけらが、
記憶や魔力を集めて、再生しようとしている。
Yuuno:
The lingering small fragment
gathered memories and magic and began to regenerate.
The small, lingering fragment
gathered memories and magic then began to regenerate.
なのは:
じゃ・・・じゃあ、
今戦ったヴィータちゃんは・・・・・・。
Nanoha:
S... so,
S... So,
the Vita-chan that I just fought.......
リンディ:
それから、
なのはは無事か、って。
Lindy:
And,
she wondered if Nanoha was alright.
And then asked,
"Is Nanoha okay?"
リインフォース:
高町なのは・・・・・・
聞こえるか。私だ。
Reinforce:
Takamachi Nanoha......
Can you hear me? It's me.
Can you hear? It's me.
- Really feels redundant to say "me" twice here. You could always go with
Can you hear me? It's Reinforce.
なのは:
すみません・・・
どちらに行かれるか、
伺ってもよろしいでしょうか?
Nanoha:
Excuse me...
Can I ask
- I view Nanoha as a polite child, so that's why I suggested "May I ask". People so used to using "can" and (ry
闇の欠片シグナム:
私は闇の書の騎士だ。
どこの誰とも知れぬ主のもと、
闇の書のために戦う。
Dark Piece Signum:
I am a knight of the Book of Darkness.
I fight for the Book of Darkness
and my Meister, whoever he may be.
- Just asking if we'll use Meister over Master for future cases.
なのは:
ごめんなさい・・・・・・
シャマルさん。
Nanoha:
I'm sorry......
Shamal-san
Shamal-san.
- lol periods.
なのは:
平気だよ、
レイジングハート・・・・・・
大丈夫。
Nanoha:
It's alright,
It's all right,
Raising Heart......
I'll be okay.
IT'S NOT ALL RIGHT TO USE ALRIGHT. ;_;
なのは:
ユーノくんの話、
いつもわかりやすいし、
元気になれるから・・・・・・嬉しい!
Nanoha:
Yuuno-kun's words
are always easy to understand,
and makes me feel better...... so I'm glad!
and make me feel better...... so I'm glad!
ユーノ:
ん。
気をつけて!
Yuuno:
Yeah,
take care!
Yeah.
Take care!
雷刃の襲撃者:
何故だろう。
君の存在は、著しく不快だ。
君を見ていると、苛立ちがつのる。
Lightning Blade Assailant:
That's probably why.
Your very existance is extremely revolting.
Your very existence is extremely revolting.
Just looking at you makes my irritation grow
なのは:
安心して・・・・・・
別人と思って、戦えるッ!!
Nanoha:
Calm down......
If I see her as someone else, I could fight!!
If I see her as someone else, I can fight!!
or
If I saw her as someone else, I could fight!!
闇の欠片はやて:
あー、そーや~。
年明けに、練習試合の約束してたな~?
Dark Piece Hayate:
Oh, that's right~.
Didn't we promise to have a practice match before the New Year~?
- Er, we used "new year" in a previous thing. I'd like to be a little consistent, so please pick either New Year or new year. orz
Different ‒ – — do different things. -- = ——
*scratches head*
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