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Old 2008-07-27, 21:43   Link #119
miroku2192
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Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: Best Place In The WORLD
Age: 32
Alright, after seeing episode 16 of SEASON 2, and after reading some really good fanfictions (like karuma's, man that was good, im waiting for the new ones hehe :X), i've decided to write one of my own based off of what could happen after episode 16. I'm going to try to write a lot if i get some good/constructive feedback, not stuff like "it sucks, or it's really good", but something along the lines of "you should work on this or that".

I've never really written one before, and thought it'd be cool to share my ideas.

THE ONLY THING IS, the one i just wrote a few min ago, was written really fast, but contains spoilers FROM episode 16 and is basically a speculation of what might happen in episode 17. If you guys DON"T mind reading it, please leave some feedback. The ONLY problem is that the fanfiction site doesn't allow me to post a new story until two days after registering...and i just registered. So i'm going to go ahead and post my story under a spoiler tag.

BEWARE - THIS FANFICTION OF MINE IS WRITTEN AFTER WATCHING EPISODE 16 OF SEASON 2, THAT MEANS THERE ARE SPOILERS CONTAINING THE LAST PARTS OF THIS EPISODE, AND IT COVERS WHAT MIGHT HAPPEN IN THE NEXT...PLEASE LEAVE CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK:
Spoiler for fanfiction contains spoiler from episode 16 of S2 and talks about what might happen:


please help me .

Last edited by miroku2192; 2008-07-28 at 07:02.
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