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Originally Posted by Satashi
Spinel Heart
Progress: not sure
length: 10,000 words
Separated in chapters due to excessive length.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3849110/1/
Enjoy chapter one.
edit: cookies if you now the pictures that inspired this story <3
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Wee~ New fic. Epic as usual, Satashi
You really had quite a bit of, um, detail at the end of that chapter
. Man, I can only wish my fics were as good and popular as yours
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Originally Posted by Jimmy C
Btw, are you sure they finished off Precia in October? I wanted to check, but I couldn't find any firm clues as to when the last episodes of Lyrical Nanoha took place. My own assumption is that it that it should have ended before the Knights were activated in A's, because they would certainly investigate any battles between Nanoha and Fate to see if it was a threat to Hayate.
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I think the time-skip from Nanoha to Nanoha A's was 6 months. So since A's starts off in December, the Precia Incident would have ended around June 2005 (I think it was 2005 on the calenders shown...at work so can't really check my episodes
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Originally Posted by akichimihito
I started writing a HS fic about Nanoha and Fate and this is what I have so far...(well I have more but I don't want to give it all away XD)
Spoiler for length though not by much:
“Fate-chan!”
The blonde mage turned around and smiled at the all too familiar voice she would never get tired of.
“Good morning, Nanoha.” Fate waited for her best friend to catch up to where she was, not being able to help the smile that came upon her lips. Nanoha smiled warmly in return and linked arms with the burgundy eyed girl as the two of them walked towards the entrance of their high school.
“Good morning, Fate-chan.” The smile on the brunette’s face grew brighter and she held Fate’s arm tighter for a brief moment before she let go only to reach down and hold the blonde’s hand.
Fate couldn’t help but notice that the usual group wasn’t with Nanoha this morning. The only time all five of them wouldn’t be able to come together would be when Fate, Hayate, and or Nanoha would be off training. Fate knew that Hayate wasn’t called out and it was obvious Nanoha had been on Earth, so where were Suzuka and Arisa?
As if sensing her curiosity, Nanoha smiled and answered. “Suzuka-chan and Arisa-chan had early morning practice for the concert coming up soon and Hayate had to go take care of something. She was called out this morning.”
“I see.” Fate gave a slight nod of understanding, her eyes never leaving Nanoha’s.
“You’ve been gone for three days, did you just get back?” Nanoha asked, knowing that whenever Fate returned from a short mission the first thing the blonde girl would do was to give Nanoha the details. The TSAB, more precisely Chrono, decided to only give Fate missions that would still allow her to go to school on earth and not fall behind.
“Mmm, I came back late last night and I didn’t want to wake you.” Fate replied. She felt herself blush when Nanoha pouted at her answer.
Nanoha always looked so adorable when she pouted…
“You know that I wouldn’t mind if you called, Fate-chan! Hearing Fate-chan’s voice, no matter how sleepy or grumpy I am will always make me happy!” Nanoha laughed when Fate blushed even more.
“Ah- w-well…I-I didn’t…u-um…s-sorry…” Fate looked down at the ground. It was always liked this, Nanoha would make Fate blush in one way or another, Fate would then stutter and then look away or at the ground to avoid eye contact.
This was a reaction Nanoha loved to see because to her, Fate always looked so adorable when she was embarrassed.
“It’s okay Fate-chan but next time you better give me a call or contact me telepathically. I always worry about you when you’re away; you know that, don’t you?” Nanoha had stopped walking and stood completely in front of the burgundy eyed girl, blue eyes gazed questioningly.
“Mmm, I know but…” The smile Fate had slowly faded away as a certain memory resurfaced, “I worry about you too. I noticed that you look a little pale today, you haven’t been rigorously training in the cold morning weather have you?”
Nanoha let out a nervous laugh and scratched her cheek sheepishly, “Well I wasn’t training…actually…I was up late waiting to see if you would call…I guess I should have expected you to always think about others first…nyahaha…”
Fate wanted to glare but given the reason for Nanoha’s tired state, she felt guilty and wished she had pressed the dial button the moment she opened her cell phone the night before. Nanoha saw the worried but mainly guilty look she was given and the slightly shorter girl waved her hands in front of her.
“Ah! Fate-chan! Don’t worry! It’s not your fault! I also had to leave for training yesterday and was up late working on homework so don’t give me that look…” Despite what she said, the guilty look never left. “Really, it’s okay…come on, we’re going to be late for class if we don’t hurry.”
“Mmm.” Fate didn’t quite feel satisfied but she dropped the subject for now. She trusted Nanoha and knew that her best friend wouldn’t do anything that would strain her body quite as she did back then. But that also didn’t mean Fate wasn’t always going to keep a watchful eye on Nanoha anymore. She vowed to protect Nanoha and that was a promise she did not intend to break.
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Mmmm...I think it has potential to turn out to be a nice fic
. Just needs a few cosmetic fixes like Satashi mentioned and it'll be even better. Then again, I'm such a sucker for WAFF and romance
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