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Old 2011-10-02, 10:21   Link #2079
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Originally Posted by Eratas123 View Post
Dan and Ichika manage to steamroll through 30+ guys!? Either Ichika's superhuman at this point or Dan is a crouching moron hidden badass! If Charles is as badass as he is in canon then that would help a lot *remembers volume 4*

Pacing seems fine, just dont forget to add details for what they're doing at the time
Well, Charles is just as badass as Canon version, Ichika IS a superhuman (he has vision and reflex beyond normal human, add to the fact he has armored fist as default weapon), and Dan...well...Ichika has a LOT of enemies in Junior High, makes sense for Dan to be at least strong enough to protect himself.

And of course, certain sniper duo (Cecil and Madoka) is making a BIG DAMN HEROINES with BB gun, and then Houki and Rin just happen to be there albeit a bit late...

(Especially, Rin, who still hold a grudge toward the guys)
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