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Old 2012-09-08, 12:21   Link #37199
Old_Iron
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Originally Posted by blitz1/2 View Post
So, it's the Grail? xD
Eh, close enough. =P

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED View Post


No words can truly explain my happiness after such wonderful update. I can only say: WORTH THE WAIT. You two did a wonderful job in the workshop. I'll patiently wait for the future update.
I'm glad you and everyone else enjoyed it. And that pic is hilarious.

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Originally Posted by Craxuan View Post
This chapter is definitely worth the wait. Hot sex! Sex! SEXXXXXX!
I'll admit, this reaction made me laugh something terrible. XD

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Originally Posted by Mr Coin View Post
It's good to see you update your work rather then advertising and uploading the work of others. And yes, the picture worked like a charm, I think.

I love the dynamic relationship between Yuuno and Signum, and you've nailed humor in this chapter really well - with Yuunno's devotion in his work and Signum's strict demeanor, it's like a girlfriend trying to stop her boyfriend's addiction with video games. There is also mention of Hayate's trip to boot-camp that made me chuckle like a Hyena. Don't forget Nanoha, she's good at exploiting other people in their embarrassing moments - she's the white devil after all.
I hadn't thought about that angle before, but it does seem to fit. And Yuuno is a special kind of stubborn. Well, both he and Signum are. But right now its Yuuno being the mule. XD

And I have a few ideas for Nanoha's exploitation of the situation. >=3

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I also have the feeling that Yuuno has a great potential to be an main-character in an harem based game or something. Thanks to Nanoha for quoting Signum's words in the last scene break about Yuuno being a "conqueror".
This made me think of To Love-Ru Darkness with Hayate as Momo, trying to create a harem for Yuuno so he can spread the love and she can have all the women to grope.

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Spoiler for A minor mistake:


I really hate my inner grammar-nazi-radar for spotting this small mistake. It ruins my fun for reading.
Still, thank you for pointing that out.
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