~Tsukuyomi - you might consider having a 2 pixel white border and a 1 pixel black border and see how it turns out, the quality of the stock is kinda low i think, the background kinda doesnt suit it, but thats probably because you want to emphasis the loneliness ayu is having heh... 8/10
Bakumatsu - as tsukuyomi had stated.... the first one is too plain, 3/10... as for your second one, it kind of doesn't feel right, 3/10
tea_ser - Her hands are a bit blurry, you havnt rubbed out all the surroundings of your stock completely, it is still visible... overall quite good, 7/10 (p.s, I liked your avatar though ^^!)
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