@ Eras
I don't know if I really want to add the mood whiplash-y comedic part in the end of Chapter 13 or not, or maybe, I should just introduce Josh right there, or worse, the evil counterpart of the twins (yet to be named) so to give it even higher cliff than before (pun intended)
@ Jak
Indeed, summary itself is very important. One of the bad ingredients for a fanfic is the phrase "Can't write summaries" and "Summarry sux" etc. posted right under the title.
@ New fic
I don't see Ichika, whether this is the usual shtick or outright replacement attempt had yet to be seen.