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Old 2008-06-13, 11:31   Link #74
squaresphere
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Join Date: Jan 2008
Love chap 11. Good stuff, though i'm surprised Lulu's regiment didn't go rampaging through the countryside looking for him.

The Euphie/Nunnly scene was good, I thought that contrast that Nunnly ended up supporting Euphie very good and in character.

The fact that Cornelia went out for blood was also very fun, to bad it messed up all of Schneizel work. Man he's probably craping a brick. All this is leading towards a protracted war against an entrenched enemy with no real rewards/resources to gain.

Lulu's mind is still working though, smart of his to get rid of the beacons. I forsee him and Vill uncovering who's behind the plot while they make their way back since their incognito at the moment.

Personally, I like to see Lulu and Milly together in this fic as they've been friends and he's been basically restoring her family's old township.

Great work though, can't wait for the next chap.
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