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Old 2013-04-03, 22:26   Link #41184
DarkJak2050
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Originally Posted by StratoSpear View Post
Just the Infirmary one. Can't say much aside from what Zero and Demi posted but I still want to contribute this:

It does set things up for an eventual revelation. Though I do have a feeling that the CCs would be left hanging with just the date at the end without ever knowing its relation to Hot Shot.
That's one scene I won't be posting here.

But the Infirmary scene does have the Canon characters getting curious about him and possibly his brothers as well.

The main problem with my Fic is keeping the Canon Characters themselves.
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