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Originally Posted by LKK
My second attempt. Two versions, one with text and one without as Evil Rick suggested trying.
Spoiler for screen space:
First version:
New versions:
Opinions? Recommendations? Preferences? Does the concept of Lydia as a dream figure come across without the text's explanation?
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Its actually convey very well even without text.
You'll have to sharpen the overall sig, it look too washout. Playing with level also should help.