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Old 2012-11-24, 03:50   Link #3
Chandela
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Join Date: Mar 2012
Location: Somewhere nice and quiet.
I am not really big into fanfictions but I must say that this is a nice continuation from where Tari Tari had left off. It was easy to read and I could picture everything so clearly within my mind. Character personalities were spot on and the story has me wanting to read more.
For English not being your native tongue you did a nice job. I look forward to the next chapter, keep it up!
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