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Tempest35 · 2009-12-31, 15:27

I dunno about him loving Outer more than Inner... In that one dream he had a few chapters back, he was cuddling up with a naked INNER Moka.

Sure, during the beginning chapters he was all about Outer Moka, but as we got to where Inner started injecting her blood into him, his focus began to shift gradually towards Inner. Inner also made him shift his focus on her as well in the first chapter of R+V II when she told him that in order for him to attain Outer Moka, he must first seduce her (Inner) first.

This changes my assessment of Inner Moka as well...I can't believ that I didn't consider it as well. For all her bravado and pride, she's still a 17-year old girl...she can get flustered and whatnot and act like any other girl. I absolutely MUST remember that when doing future fiction.... Truth is, this will make it more interesting.

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Tempest35 Awe of She Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Orlando	I dunno about him loving Outer more than Inner... In that one dream he had a few chapters back, he was cuddling up with a naked INNER Moka. Sure, during the beginning chapters he was all about Outer Moka, but as we got to where Inner started injecting her blood into him, his focus began to shift gradually towards Inner. Inner also made him shift his focus on her as well in the first chapter of R+V II when she told him that in order for him to attain Outer Moka, he must first seduce her (Inner) first. This changes my assessment of Inner Moka as well...I can't believ that I didn't consider it as well. For all her bravado and pride, she's still a 17-year old girl...she can get flustered and whatnot and act like any other girl. I absolutely MUST remember that when doing future fiction.... Truth is, this will make it more interesting. __________________ "Focus entirely on me, you ordinary soldier."