[Eratas123]

Since I feel bad about missing the party, here's the new <Ren> draft.

@ Zero and Wavehawk - Please tell me what you think.

Spoiler:

Team 2

The two commandos walked through the dark hallway with caution in their step, the generators had stopped running a few minutes ago and the electricity was gone for the entire building.

"Hey Nancy, do you think the others are okay?" The one leading the way asked.

"I'm sure they are Anne. Hell, knowing them, they've probably already caught the fucker and they're having a little victory dance or something."

"Well....I'm gonna go radio them to check."

Anne picked up the radio from her pocket and asked for a status report.

"Team 1, please give a status report."

*PSSSSHHHHH*

All that greeted her was the sound of static from her radio.

"Nancy, they're not replying." Anne told her friend franticly.

"Just try again, It's probably just a miscommunication." She told her.

"Team 1, please respond, we need a status report." She spoke with a little more desperation in her voice.

*CLICK*

THe radios receiver picked up the others frequency.

Anne breathed a sigh of relief. "Oh Thank Go-"

"Hi~ I'm afraid these two can't get back to you, they're taking a trip to heaven and they can't get back. I'll be sure to tell them you said hello."

The voice who replied was not the one of their teammates, it carried with it a latent sadistic intent.

Before Anne could reply, the radio had cut off and they were once again plunged into silence.

"Anne...who was that?" Nancy asked her.

"I-I don't know." She replied fearfully.

"Does this mean that team 1 is..."

"...Let's just keep moving."

Both operatives started walking with even more caution in their steps, neither knew what was about to happen.

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"Fork ahead." Nancy notified her partner.

The hallway ahead split into two paths, neither wanted to do it but they had to split up in order to lessen the search time according to mission parameters.

"I'll take the left hall and you take the right, keep your radio on so we can contact each other." Nancy continued.

"A-All right."

Nancy went to the left hallway and into the grinding facilities, this place was used to flatten and compress different metals for processing in IS equalizer building.

*klak* *klak* *klak* *klak*

Her footsteps echoed throughout the metal walkway and echoed all over the area, the shadows around her seemed to grow larger with each passing footstep.

*CLANG*

The sound of banging metal suddenly echoed around her, the quiet had been broken.

"W-What was that?" She started looking around frantically.

*HISSSSS*

The pipes all over the room started giving off sounds of hissing steam.

"C-Calm down, it's just a damn pipe" She told herself in an effort to calm down.

She started walking again but she failed to notice the pale figure hiding in the shadows.

*BANG*

"AHHH!"

*Splat*

With a sickening sound, she was thrown though the air and landed near the edge of the walkway. She looked up and saw a pale boy with a shotgun walking towards her with a smirk on his face.

"Y-You gotta be kidding me!" She gritted out.

"Kidding you?" He put the muzzle of the gun against her jaw. " I don't think so." He smiled before pulling the trigger.

*BANG*

The blood from the shot splattered all over his face, his smile grew even wider at the sight.

"Hahahahahaha~"

He laughed before kicking the woman under the grinders path, she wasn't dead yet, she would still be alive for this.

*Click*

The grinder started to move downards towards the helpless woman's body, there was no chance of saving her at this point.

"NANCY!"

He went back into the shadows as he heard footsteps getting closer, this would make it his 4th kill.

"NANCY!"

Anne made her way towards the source of the sounds and found a horrifying sight, her partners body about to be crushed.

She went to the control panel and frantically pressed all the buttons in an effort to stop the machine.

*Click*

The Grinder stopped it's downward spiral but it made no difference, both would die soon enough.

*Splat*

Anne looked down and saw that she had stepped into a large puddle of blood.

"Wh-What's going on!? This wasn't supposed to happen!"

She kneeled down in shock after what she just saw, she was too numb to continue at this point.

"I-I'm gonna die here aren't I?" She asked herself.

She didn't realize that her death was standing just behind her, smiling as he prepared to end her life.

*BANG*

@ Zero - Corrupt my innocent soul? You're talking about the person who's writing "SWC" and is currently writing a psycho vs psycho noir fic.