[Zaku Hyuga]

Originally Posted by Quzor

Well, it was supposed to be out yesterday, but I got lazy. So it's here today instead. Chapter 5 of "The Devil's Offspring."

http://narutofic.org/viewstory.php?sid=7521&chapter=5

Please enjoy, and if you have any feedback, I'd certainly love to hear it

*Fangirl Scream!!!!!* Yay! *coughs* sorry about that was so exited when I saw the new chapter that I instantly clicked on it and read it in five minutes. Not saying you don't write enough, just i love it so much. That was the most awesome fight you have ever written. I saw eerything happening in my head, that it took me a minute to realize that i wasn't watching TV but reading the story. Hope you keep them coming, because I'm devouring them as they do.