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arkblazer · 2011-01-09, 14:39

Man where do i start?

First off, you really need to work on your grammar, it sounds pretty awkward. (possibly because you were using present tense) and you are doing a lot of typos, using the wrong words and/or missing some of them altogether.

I cant really help you much because in all honesty; my grammar is pretty horrid as well. But at the very least try and use Microsoft word to help you.

As for the story, be careful with your OC there. While reading your summary my marysuedar blared quite a few times. Keep in mind that at least some people are going to have a low tolerance for Author Created Characters, so try to add them flaws and not make them too perfect. A good OC is one that can complement the setting and canon characters, not the other way around.

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arkblazer Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2010	Man where do i start? First off, you really need to work on your grammar, it sounds pretty awkward. (possibly because you were using present tense) and you are doing a lot of typos, using the wrong words and/or missing some of them altogether. I cant really help you much because in all honesty; my grammar is pretty horrid as well. But at the very least try and use Microsoft word to help you. As for the story, be careful with your OC there. While reading your summary my marysuedar blared quite a few times. Keep in mind that at least some people are going to have a low tolerance for Author Created Characters, so try to add them flaws and not make them too perfect. A good OC is one that can complement the setting and canon characters, not the other way around. Last edited by arkblazer; 2011-01-09 at 16:54.