Oh wow Sofiel, I never knew you were such a talented writer.
The Forbidden Desire Prologue is quite a piece of work. The notion about humans' "False Masks", I've actually thought about that once myself...it actually makes sense. A very down to earth piece of text you have here, and you use some good language throughout. Nicely done.
Promise I'll read the rest, I'm very lazy when it comes to reading.
Keep it up.