[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - Here, the end of the flashback arc. It's just short but please tell me what you think.

Spoiler:

POV: Allen

Location: Unknown

"Haaa Haaa, Damn it!"

The pain was intense, the stab managed to pierce though my stomach and through my backside. I could feel the blood clotting, trying to seal the wound, but I knew it was pointless.

Everything around me was black, I couldn't open my eyes.

"What's happening, Joshua?" A voice above me asked. The voice sounded older, a man by the sounds of it.

"I don't know, it looks like his stomach was pierced through along with chipping his spine." The man who replied seemed to be a doctor by the sounds of things.

"Is he gonna be alright" This time the voice sounded younger, more familiar.

"It's possible to save him, but....."

"But what!?"

"This isn't a hospital, I'm afraid I don't have the necessary materials to help him. I'm sorry."

"..."

So this is how it's going to end? Me dying at some unknown place after getting stabbed through? Well, as long as Yuri's safe-

"Let me join you!"

What?

"You're just a kid, you'd be useless."

That's right, this is your chance for a normal life!

"I know how the cores work and how to destroy them! I've been learning about them for the past months! I wont be useless!"

"What do you think, Joshua?"

"I disagree, he's a child and shouldn't get involved, but the final decision rests on you, Mason."

"...Alright, we'll give you a chance."

'No, I can't let this happen!'

I try to move my arms but all I can manage is some slight shaking. Damn it, he's signing up to die and there's nothing else I can do!?

'No! If I'm dying, I'm not letting him die either!'

I try to ignore the pain and push my body to move.

"Allen!"

I open my eyes and dizziness immediately takes hold. I look to the right to see Yuri with a worried look on his face.

"Yuri-" I struggle to move my hand but he held it before I could.

"Allen, it's alright."

No, it wasn't alright! He was putting a death sentence to himself and there's nothing I can do!

"Yuri....don't-" I couldn't finish what I was going to say before another surge of pain went through me.

"Don't worry, Allen. I won't"

"You won't?" He wasn't going to let himself die?

"I won't let her live, she'll die for what she's done."

"No-" Another surge of pain and my hand starts to go limp, I wasn't going to be here for much longer.

"Just rest, Allen. I'll see you soon."

My vision was fading, I couldn't stay awake much longer.

"Goodbye, Allen. I'll miss you."

'I'll miss you too....'

Everything went black, I was going to leave him now.

*Sniff*

I felt something moist drop on my hands. I'm sorry Yuri, I did the best I could.

"So,we're gonna have to call you something now that you're here."

"..."

"You were lucky to survive that camp, let's call you "Irish" then"

"...Alright."

Goodbye, Yuri. I love you.

Please tell me what you think.

Nice, is this a draft? if so, can you make a more detailed expression on Allen's despair (both physically and psychically helpless) in the full chapter? Maybe that'll help pushing the emotion a bit more.

@General Hawk

LAWL Ange is awesome!