[icyhandofcrap]

Need to sleep. I've given up on editing to make it flow better. I was right on my guess where I had no idea!

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Yuri: Eh? You're saying something so unpleasant. But I'm so gentle.
Yuri: Just advise him that he should join us in getting revenge against God.
Hinata: You can't really say that's a gentle approach
Yuri: Oh it's gentle. Otherwise he won't be able to be with you anymore.
Hinata: You've gone too far
Hinata: How do I explain this to her? This person is missing some important pieces inside her
Hinata: No matter what I say I always end up getting beat up
Hinata: If this were a game, there would probably be these options. And then things would be easy...

Options:
Give Yurippe an explanation
Do whatever Yurippe wants
Give Yurippe a tight hug

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Hinata: There's no way I'd do the last one!!
Yuri: Hey! Snap out of it (why are you in a daze?)
Yuri: If you want to help me, quickly go find him.
Yuri: You're really useless!
Hinata: ... Yurippe
Hinata: You... if you keep being like this no one is going to want to follow you

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Yuri: ... what? Are you preaching to me now?
Hinata: ... didn't mean it like that. In order to accomplish the goal of revenge against God, we need more companions
Hinata: If we only have two people, not even considering God, we aren't able to put up a resistance against Tenshi, so...
Yuri: I know! That's why I told you to quickly go find him, isn't it?
Hinata: You're way too overbearing! I don't know how to but describe it in words... but anyways you're way too overbearing!
Yuri: So what? In this afterlife, no matter how you get hurt you'll immediately be fine
Hinata: ... so if you continue being like this, no one is giong to want to follow you...
Hinata: Ooyama or anyone else won't want to be your companion

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Hinata: You're not as capable as you think you are
Yuri: ...
Hinata: So, if it's only you, you won't be able to achieve anything, so companions are definitely necessary. Although with you as you are now, you won't be able to find any companions!
Hinata: Don't just think of your goal. To find companions you need to think of various aspects
Hinata: Otherwise you'll just be an isolated force fighting by yourself bitterly.
Yuri: ...
Yuri: I get it
Hinata: Yurippe!
Yuri: Enough!

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Yuri: Let's disband!
Hinata: How can you be like this? No way!
Yuri: I only have to say I don't want to. I've already said I don't want to be with you anymore!
Hinata: No! I've already decided that I would always be with you!
Yuri: Eh? That's disgusting! You're like a stalker!
Yuri: I don't need any companions. Just myself is enough.
Yuri: That's how I've always gotten by

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Yuri: Bye!
Yuri: Farewell!
Hinata: Yurippe...
Hinata: ...
Hinata: ... shit
Hinata: Although... I was only stating the truth, right? Even though I've gotten myself disliked.

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Hinata (bar): That girl should have at least understood at little of what I was talking about, right?
Hinata: Oh! Ooyama!
Ooyama: Ah! Hinata-san, you're okay, right?
Hinata: Haha, I'm fine, I'm fine! I've already died once so in this world no matter how I'm injured I'm immediately fine again.
Ooyama: ... Hinata-san's also already dead? ... That's so sad
Hinata: ... you're really a good guy

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Ooyama: Hinata-san, you sacrificed yourself to let me me escape... and you're surprisingly friends with that girl. You're pretty awesome.
Hinata: ... ah... don't flatter me
Hinata: It looks like I'm not friends with her anymore
Ooyama: Eh? ... did you guys have a fight?
Hinata: Yeah, we split up
Ooyama: ... really...
Ooyama: So that's why you have such a long face
Hinata: ... it's not because of that
Hinata: .... ah. I'm alone again. What should I do?
Ooyama: Don't you still have me?
Hinata: Ah, right. I forgot.
Ooyama: Eh? That's too much

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Ooyama: Aren't I right in front of your eyes? Seriously!
Hinata: Hahaha, sorry, sorry
Hinata: ... Ooyama, what do you want to do now? Straighten out your feelings?
Ooyama: The-the physiology of fe-feelings? (note: Ooyama misheard what Hinata said)
Ooyama: There's the physiology of feelings? I didn't know that!!
Hinata: No... not physiology, sorting out your feelings
Ooyama: Wah! I've made such an embarrassing mistake!
Ooyama: Although, what do you mean straigtening out my feelings?
Hinata: Ah, right. You still don't know anything about this world. This world exists to allow us dead people to remember the pains we had before we died
Hinata: Sorting out our feelings will allow us to reach heaven
Ooyama: Ah! So that's what it's like?