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Old 2012-02-20, 13:41   Link #27931
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Originally Posted by ndqanh_vn View Post
Personally I think Yasu is the less convincing character in the story. Too much drama and angst is filled on her to the point that it became a bit unbelievable. I do not want to bully Ryukishi here, I just want to understand how an author could make a character "real" and interesting. The concept behind Yasu is nice, I think it is the problem of "being recognized" and "being understood." But sometimes I feel the characters lean too much on this concept that she barely could feel real.
Well, the unfortunate problem is that he couldn't top Beatrice as a character, and he kind of had to. Not that it's impossible for the creator to be less dynamic and awesome than the creation, but they at least need to have the same degree of depth, which I personally wasn't sold on Yasu having.

I think there are hints of that possibility (her undercurrent of extreme rationality), but it's never developed enough as a theme for me to know if it was intended to be there.
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