Undercover Mole
Graphic Designer
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: ~Floating on the edge
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Evil Rick
Vatican Knights
Spoiler for Allies:
Time runs like water, to fast that you can't even hold it, but hold it wasn't my intention, I wanted to get stronger, I wanted to get stronger than the Slaves of the Dark, I wanted to get stronger to kill them all!
Years pass and that little girl grow up, I was 16 years old when it was time to my first mission, to my first strike, to my first stape for revenge
That day we all were very nervous, we knew we could die, yes, we... me and my friends, my family, my partners.
First was Karil Nightstar, since that dark night she and me became like sisters, ja... all those years of training in the monastery were very funny with her, she always was at my side, grabbed of my leg or clothes, crying and saying "Vivio I'm scare!!!" She asked to me all nights if I could go and slept with her. My best friend, she had also grow up into a brave woman, but still she was looking for her friend Vivio in "Scary" times
Alphonse Cross was also a great friend of me and Karil, a very handsome boy, like 17 in that time, very pollite and well clothed, and also very skilled in the esgrima, although me and the other girls always make mock of him, he was very shy, God he got like a tomato every time we make him jokes like "Dear Alphonse, could you please hold this while I take my clothes of?" I will never forget my dear Alphonse, Along with him was Helga Daymon, like 16 in that time, very iperactive, always with some crazy idea, very sarcastic and of course, always waiting for any chance to torture the poor Alphonse, but she was always with a radiant smile in her face abalible to meelt any "Heart of Rock"
By last, It was Jasper Green, 17 in that time, the Optimist "It can be worse" was his leme, inside of me, he was like an example, when Jasper was a kid, he got burned in a Fire, he ended desfigurated and always be with us covered with bends in all his body, althoug he always saied "It can be worse"
This was my family, they were those who I wished to protect, the time was coming, our first challenge, our first task, our firsside by side fight...
I was not scare, I knew we were going to do it...
NOTE: Actually I'm working on Draws of Karil Nightstar, Alphonse Cross, Helga Daymon and Jasper Green, soon you will know how they look
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I liked the first line. Some spelling mistakes that got me confused but still good. So are al the battle scenes coming in the next update?
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