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About that- I need to go over it about 200 more times, because there's something about the way you ended that I like but dislike at the same time, and I can't place my finger on what it is or how I want to change it
hopefully you'll see it within the next couple of days (or you could think of this as being my equivalent to your editing process- no hard feelings, really *insert ominous chuckle from nowhere here*)
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