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Old 2010-03-21, 17:21   Link #6266
GlassesLady
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Originally Posted by alu546 View Post
EDIT: Glasseslady: Im tired and dont feel up to proofreading. But trust me, it was far worse than that originally lol
Whatever, those typos were epic, man. Epiiiic.

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Originally Posted by Bastion_Arcion View Post
I'd really love it if some genre-savvy character showed up and pointed out that Hayate filled the former requirements for the inheritance, thus giving a somewhat plausible excuse to the attacks against him, and him willing it back to Nagi. Thus ending the debate, returning life to normal and once again stating his devotion to Nagi all in one fell swoop.
Causing Nagi to have a debt to repay Hayate for as well
Nice, nice.... But I was more thinking that Mikado might have second thoughts about disowning Nagi once he finds out that it was Nagi herself that broke the stone. Or something.
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