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Originally Posted by Langus
Thank you very much  What a great way to start my day. And I do plan to continue writing. It's become a big hobby for me since I started a couple years ago. FMP characters ... they certainly don't make it easy to write them though hahaha |
Hi Langus I just read your fanfic of Breathless and I must give you a high five, because you did an awesome job. I love how well written your story is. The flow of the two characters sharing this experience (PERFECT).
What you wrote is exactly how I picture their first time will be, and I'm hoping something like what you wrote will be included in the Gatoh's work. I think you did an excellent job.
PS. I gave you feedback on the fanfiction website.