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Originally Posted by KiRa08o2
I added a "y"somewhere? 
Yeah, well, I kinda skipped some interactions. But they are more in the sort of "Brother, I want to marry you" "No I don't wanna" "I'll make it so it will happen", etc. But I cut quite less in the case of chapter 3, since I am scared that things I didn't point out might serve as foreshadowing or things like that. |
Sorry my mistake. You've added a second h in "Shougo's" name. It's spelled
"Shougo" not "Shohgo", don't add a second h just a u, that's all. Can't wait for another summary, and yes, that your time.