Holy crap RadiantBeam is high maintenance. CMHerrera, I'm giving you a rep. Truly, such willpower to withstand such flood of requests must be difficult.
I also like your fanfiction, CM =3 Truth be told the ending wasn't what I wanted it to be.
But it was all very playful, fix some of the more prominent grammar mistakes and you're ready to go. I like it.
... No, I don't support Izaya x Shizzy, but I should >_>