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Originally Posted by Shinobu_Maehara
It's nice for a begin, but I will advice you to use less blur.
The face is good, I can't see any major errors, the shading is nice, but it's too blurry. It hurts my eyes.
Try to make your art sharper, then you'll be fine.
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I'll second Shinobu's opinion. It hurts my eyes. Try to give it SOME defining lines.
Also, was your's the post that had the fellow with blue hair you did on MS Paint?
If so, then WOW! What a difference!
As far as MS Paint goes, it works best if you scan in the general outline of the subject, switch it to duotone (Or monochrome, I think that's the term that Paint uses), and then reinforce your lines and clean them up, and then finally add shading.
However, since you obviously have access to more advanced programs, use them instead.
Good work!