Thread: Nozoki Ana
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Old 2011-01-02, 23:56   Link #14
Shadow5YA
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True, I do find that direct statements like the one at the end of ch14 to be a poor use of foreshadowing. Foreshadowing should be a bit more subtle where readers pick up on the hints and details on their own, like in ch11.
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